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new poetry in which i romanticize things that are not that romantic, but are sweet all the same. i dramatized most of the events as to how important they were, because that&#8217;s what poets do. the last bit especially.
ahhh, what verse does for a situation.
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<p>new poetry in which i romanticize things that are not that romantic, but are sweet all the same. i dramatized most of the events as to how important they were, because that&#8217;s what poets do. the last bit especially.</p>
<p>ahhh, what verse does for a situation.</p>
<p>i&#8217;m going to copy it to here, but please comment at my deviant? please? because you love me?
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<blockquote><span style="font-size:100%;">     you have shared with me several kisses-<br />two of three in that dim gray stairwell<br />through which we have oft double timed<br />our booted feet clicking against cold industrial steel as one<br />and the backs of our hands brushing while we remained<br />silent; because that cliché of knowing each other well enough<br />well enough applies to us.</p>
<p>and then once- a week ago-<br />you paused and i stopped and i turned to ask why<br />standing a step above you, we were still not of a height<br />and before i questioned you answered<br />lips on mine, hand in mine, eyes with mine-<br />all interrupted by the jarring scream of a bell<br />whose sound startled us, pulled you away.</p>
<p>it was like this the second time, yesterday except it was<br />more expected, easier accepted, and then<br />your fingers kept mine as the bell clanged and we double-timed.</p>
<p>the third time in a quiet room at the apex of the stairwell<br />not alone this time, you waited for our companion to look away<br />and kissed me once, arms ringing my waist.<br />he turned back- accused you and<br />you admitted your sin and did not repent<br />and i smiled and that time<br />i kissed you.</span></p></blockquote>
<p>and to disguise the SACCHARINE DISGUSTING BLOB OF YUCK I HAVE BECOME, poetry from a while ago:</p>
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<blockquote><span style="font-size:100%;">     their energy is greater than a tesla coil<br />surrounding me, they condemn my soul<br />and as my blood begins to boil,<br />they watch as i cavort!</p>
<p>muscles and tendons twitch and jerk<br />and limb by limb i leap to dance<br />constrained by wicked metal jaws,<br />my dying body hems and haws</p>
<p>and from my gaping mouth come chants and rants!<br />clarity is disdained by vocal cords that smoke<br />how they frown as my bowels release into prison pants!<br />oh, the unfortunate smell of death.</p>
<p>as current stops with breaker pull,<br />my felonious corpse trembles, falls!<br />i&#8217;m held in place by rubber shackle,<br />but i stare out with one clouded eyeball.</p>
<p>at last the crowd cheers an encore,<br />and  hails the power of two thousand volts!</span></p></blockquote>
<p>i&#8217;m not sure which i like better. one of kisses and one of the horrors of state mandated murder. i do think i am developing a new style though. i&#8217;ve never written so many bloody first persons in my life. in fact, i&#8217;ve never written first person before.</p>
<p>oh and by the way- the second one is DEFINITELY not from my point of view, even if it IS first person. -smirk-</div>
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armistice day:the celebration of the cessation of world war one, during the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month, nineteen eighteen.
it was changed to veterans day after wwii.
recognition / rememberance of both with poetry i enjoy.
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<p>armistice day:<br />the celebration of the cessation of world war one, during the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month, nineteen eighteen.</p>
<p>it was changed to veterans day after wwii.</p>
<p>recognition / rememberance of both with poetry i enjoy.</p>
<p></span><span style="font-weight:bold;">Dulce Et Decorum Est</span><br /><span style="font-weight:bold;">Wilfred Owen.</p>
<p></span>Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,<br />Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,<br />Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs<br />And towards our distant rest began to trudge.<br />Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots<br />But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;<br />Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots<br />Of disappointed shells that dropped behind.</p>
<p>GAS! Gas! Quick, boys!&#8211; An ecstasy of fumbling,<br />Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;<br />But someone still was yelling out and stumbling<br />And floundering like a man in fire or lime.&#8211;<br />Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light<br />As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.</p>
<p>In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,<br />He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.</p>
<p>If in some smothering dreams you too could pace<br />Behind the wagon that we flung him in,<br />And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,<br />His hanging face, like a devil&#8217;s sick of sin;<br />If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood<br />Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,<br />Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud<br />Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,&#8211;<br />My friend, you would not tell with such high zest<br />To children ardent for some desperate glory,<br />The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est<br />Pro patria mori.</p>
<p><span style="font-family:verdana;font-size:78%;"></span><span style="font-weight:bold;">In Flanders Fields<br />Lieutenant Colonel John McCrae, MD (1872-1918)<br />Canadian Army</p>
<p></span>In Flanders fields the poppies blow<br />Between the crosses, row on row<br />That mark our place; and in the sky<br />The larks, still bravely singing, fly<br />Scarce heard amid the guns below.</p>
<p>We are the Dead. Short days ago<br />We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,<br />Loved and were loved, and now we lie<br />In Flanders fields.</p>
<p>Take up our quarrel with the foe:<br />To you from failing hands we throw<br />The torch; be yours to hold it high.<br />If ye break faith with us who die<br />We shall not sleep, though poppies grow<br />In Flanders fields.</p>
<p><span style="font-weight:bold;">1916<br />Motorhead</p>
<p></span>16 years old when I went to war,<br />To fight for a land fit for heroes,<br />God on my side,and a gun in my hand,<br />Counting my days down to zero,<br />And I marched and I fought and I bled<br />And I died &amp; I never did get any older,<br />But I knew at the time, That a year in the line,<br />Is a long enough life for a soldier,<br />We all volunteered,<br />And we wrote down our names,<br />And we added two years to our ages,<br />Eager for life and ahead of the game,<br />Ready for history&#8217;s pages,<br />And we fought and we brawled<br />And we whored &#8217;til we stood,<br />Ten thousand shoulder to shoulder,<br />A thirst for the Hun,<br />We were food for the gun,and that&#8217;s<br />What you are when you&#8217;re soldiers,<br />I heard my friend cry,<br />And he sank to his knees,coughing blood<br />As he screamed for his mother<br />And I tell by his, side,<br />And that&#8217;s how we died,<br />Clinging like kids to each other,<br />And I lay in the mud<br />And the guts and the blood,<br />And I wept as his body grew colder,<br />And I called for my mother<br />And she never came,<br />Though it wasn&#8217;t my fault<br />And I wasn&#8217;t to blame,<br />The day not half over<br />And ten thousand slain,and now<br />There&#8217;s nobody remembers our names Í<br />And that&#8217;s how it is for a soldier<br /><span style="font-family:verdana;font-size:78%;"><br /></span><span style="font-weight:bold;">Ballad of the Green Berets</span><br />Fighting soldiers from the sky<br />Fearless men who jump and die<br />Men who mean just what they say<br />The brave men of the Green Beret</p>
<p>Silver wings upon their chest<br />These are men, America&#8217;s best<br />One hundred men we&#8217;ll test today<br />But only three win the Green Beret</p>
<p>Trained to live, off nature&#8217;s land<br />Trained in combat, hand to hand<br />Men who fight by night and day<br />Courage deep, from the Green Beret</p>
<p>Silver wings upon their chest<br />These are men, America&#8217;s best<br />One hundred men we&#8217;ll test today<br />But only three win the Green Beret</p>
<p>Back at home a young wife waits<br />Her Green Beret has met his fate<br />He has died for those oppressed<br />Leaving her this last request</p>
<p>Put silver wings on my son&#8217;s chest<br />Make him one of America&#8217;s best<br />He&#8217;ll be a man they&#8217;ll test one day<br />Have him win the Green Beret</p>
<p><span style="font-weight:bold;">Tommy</span><br /><span style="font-weight:bold;">by Rudyard Kipling</span></p>
<p>I went into a public-&#8217;ouse to get a pint o&#8217; beer,<br />The publican &#8216;e up an&#8217; sez, &#8220;We serve no red-coats here.&#8221;<br />The girls be&#8217;ind the bar they laughed an&#8217; giggled fit to die,<br />I outs into the street again an&#8217; to myself sez I:<br />O it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; &#8220;Tommy, go away&#8221;;<br />But it&#8217;s &#8220;Thank you, Mister Atkins&#8221;, when the band begins to play,<br />The band begins to play, my boys, the band begins to play,<br />O it&#8217;s &#8220;Thank you, Mister Atkins&#8221;, when the band begins to play.</p>
<p>I went into a theatre as sober as could be,<br />They gave a drunk civilian room, but &#8216;adn&#8217;t none for me;<br />They sent me to the gallery or round the music-&#8217;alls,<br />But when it comes to fightin&#8217;, Lord! they&#8217;ll shove me in the stalls!<br />For it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; &#8220;Tommy, wait outside&#8221;;<br />But it&#8217;s &#8220;Special train for Atkins&#8221; when the trooper&#8217;s on the tide,<br />The troopship&#8217;s on the tide, my boys, the troopship&#8217;s on the tide,<br />O it&#8217;s &#8220;Special train for Atkins&#8221; when the trooper&#8217;s on the tide.</p>
<p>Yes, makin&#8217; mock o&#8217; uniforms that guard you while you sleep<br />Is cheaper than them uniforms, an&#8217; they&#8217;re starvation cheap;<br />An&#8217; hustlin&#8217; drunken soldiers when they&#8217;re goin&#8217; large a bit<br />Is five times better business than paradin&#8217; in full kit.<br />Then it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; &#8220;Tommy, &#8216;ow&#8217;s yer soul?&#8221;<br />But it&#8217;s &#8220;Thin red line of &#8216;eroes&#8221; when the drums begin to roll,<br />The drums begin to roll, my boys, the drums begin to roll,<br />O it&#8217;s &#8220;Thin red line of &#8216;eroes&#8221; when the drums begin to roll.</p>
<p>We aren&#8217;t no thin red &#8216;eroes, nor we aren&#8217;t no blackguards too,<br />But single men in barricks, most remarkable like you;<br />An&#8217; if sometimes our conduck isn&#8217;t all your fancy paints,<br />Why, single men in barricks don&#8217;t grow into plaster saints;<br />While it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; &#8220;Tommy, fall be&#8217;ind&#8221;,<br />But it&#8217;s &#8220;Please to walk in front, sir&#8221;, when there&#8217;s trouble in the wind,<br />There&#8217;s trouble in the wind, my boys, there&#8217;s trouble in the wind,<br />O it&#8217;s &#8220;Please to walk in front, sir&#8221;, when there&#8217;s trouble in the wind.</p>
<p>You talk o&#8217; better food for us, an&#8217; schools, an&#8217; fires, an&#8217; all:<br />We&#8217;ll wait for extry rations if you treat us rational.<br />Don&#8217;t mess about the cook-room slops, but prove it to our face<br />The Widow&#8217;s Uniform is not the soldier-man&#8217;s disgrace.<br />For it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; &#8220;Chuck him out, the brute!&#8221;<br />But it&#8217;s &#8220;Saviour of &#8216;is country&#8221; when the guns begin to shoot;<br />An&#8217; it&#8217;s Tommy this, an&#8217; Tommy that, an&#8217; anything you please;<br />An&#8217; Tommy ain&#8217;t a bloomin&#8217; fool &#8212; you bet that Tommy sees!<span style="font-weight:bold;"></span></p>
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